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BARE FOOTS IN THE BLACK SOIL

On a harsh golden day under the sun, the boy started to run bare footed in the fields of black soil which was just burning and was extracting a tremendous heat out . Summer was just testing the human tolerance. But the boy was giving a tough fight. No one knows why was he pacing himself in the fields, but whoever saw was just shocked. He was either overcoming his anger or wanted to prove his worth in the world , whatsoever he was or wanted to prove was killing him inside. He didn’t felt the heat but the soil was heated up with his emotions coming out there. He was not worried about himself because the situations made him worst to act. He was just crossing the patches of fields with non stop thinking and recalling. No one understood whether he was sweating or crying but his anger and emotions were falling on the soil in form of drops. The drops were full of hardwork ,trust, feelings, failure and betray.

He did not recognized that he had crossed the limits of village as well as tolerance. He became more comfortable and was on constant pace without any fatigue on his face , but his thoughts were on never ending process. He kept on watering the soil with the drops from all over his body.

But till now no one stopped him , he was running, running and just running. The people’s out there just watched his pain but didn’t felt it and dispersed. He started his fight alone and was on the verge to end alone.

His pace was slowly decreasing , his breath was just chocking and finally he stopped. He stopped but never started again he left himself fighting. Dead but his forever fighting soul was still heating up the black soil.

Even though his presence didn’t justified himself but his death proved his worth. But still no one knows whether it was sweat or tears ….

By :- PRATHMESH 🖋

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PRATHMESH GOSWAMI ....is a always thinking boy with a mentality of always expressing the reality and day to day situations in a easy words, and have a dream to become PERSONALITY💯

20 thoughts on “BARE FOOTS IN THE BLACK SOIL

  1. Dude!!
    It’s your first one and it is very well written!!
    I like the way you said “his sweat was watering the ground”
    Loved it. Keep it up.
    Here for more!! ❤️

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  2. Congrats for first story!! 🎉
    Keep writing.
    And just to let you know this one is very nice to be your first.
    Keep writing and you’ll get much more better.!! ❤️

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  3. Yeah bro, fist story!!!
    My friend shared this and it is so nice!!
    Short but amazing
    Long way to go, but this is an awesome start!
    Good luck ❤️

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  4. This was a great read!!
    Absolutely didn’t regret it.
    I think you should keep writing stories, for that read more and more and know about people and their stories and experiences.
    Evey person has a story of their own.
    You just need to observe it and write it down in your own way.
    I can see the capability in you, you can do so much better and you are doing amazing right now.
    Just keep doing this good work.
    Lots of good wishes and love ❤️

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  5. This is very nice bro!
    I read all of your poems too, they are great as well.
    I think, you are doing greaaatttt.
    All you need is more books in your life and just socialise and talk to people and you’ll get so much more to write about.
    You can do this!
    Would love to read more and surely i will not regret.
    Go for it brother!

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  6. Very well written prathmesh!
    I must say all of your work is awesome and you are getting better by the day!
    I wish you get published soon.
    Your book isn’t far away dude!!
    Good luck!!!

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